Sunday, July 7, 2013

An anniversary poem


I'm twenty two years now..I feel like an old man
Numb at my feet, my body's loosing heat..waves of time are washing out my beach's sand
Destiny.. the inevitable obsession is playing it's mirage at a distance
Enigma of life has proven to be nothing more than an illusion..a couple of laughs on  a short trance
Evanescence has been the most realistic thing for my mind
Peace of the soul is my philosopher stone here..destined generator of my sailing tide

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  1. Ah, at age 22 your life is just beginning. Enjoy each year of your journey.

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  2. well at 39 its not much better...ha...i would hope at 22 you still have a long way to go and will get a chance to sail into that destiny a bit more...when its far off it can seem an illusion...

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    1. That sounds very reasonable..thanks for the advice :)

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  3. Ne t'en fait pas...every ten years you will feel better and younger:)

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    2. Merci beaucoup..c'est trés encourageant. I'll remember that :)

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  4. Tino this is incredible, I love it and I can relate I have had issues with growing older since I was a small child and more accurately the sense that I may not be living as I ought, with the fervor that I ought.

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    1. That's exactly what I've been going through! Sometimes I feel like an alien..really. Any advices for me?

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